tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post8744385415195521294..comments2024-01-30T21:10:26.513-05:00Comments on Sarah Grimm: Six Sentence Sunday 1/22Sarah Grimmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03737049126767567901noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-50219909344497860922012-01-24T12:57:11.947-05:002012-01-24T12:57:11.947-05:00Frustration and lust! Great snippet.Frustration and lust! Great snippet.Graylin Foxhttp://www.graylinfox.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-42221369751480750452012-01-22T23:52:27.796-05:002012-01-22T23:52:27.796-05:00That's a terrific first six. Conflict on many ...That's a terrific first six. Conflict on many levels from the very start. Nice!Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-22262477371004933022012-01-22T20:31:23.982-05:002012-01-22T20:31:23.982-05:00You captured his frustration great!You captured his frustration great!Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-23329371945995952102012-01-22T19:15:56.780-05:002012-01-22T19:15:56.780-05:00His mood is coming through great. Well done!His mood is coming through great. Well done!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-84600766471155683072012-01-22T18:33:37.928-05:002012-01-22T18:33:37.928-05:00Fun six as a beginning, Sarah. :)Fun six as a beginning, Sarah. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-80183351999274854112012-01-22T18:01:51.516-05:002012-01-22T18:01:51.516-05:00Oh, I kind of feel sorry for the guy staring at hi...Oh, I kind of feel sorry for the guy staring at his phone. I think he's in for some heartache ahead.diannehartsockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15874628384426574320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-71945062761669678112012-01-22T17:46:13.850-05:002012-01-22T17:46:13.850-05:00Nicely done, Sarah! We learn a lot about these peo...Nicely done, Sarah! We learn a lot about these people, much more than you'd think possible from just six sentences. My interest is piqued :)Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-14994931190282241132012-01-22T17:31:38.733-05:002012-01-22T17:31:38.733-05:00Wow, a great snippet. Hopefully you will share mo...Wow, a great snippet. Hopefully you will share more from this one!Melissa MacKinnonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-2397161086715657262012-01-22T17:22:29.795-05:002012-01-22T17:22:29.795-05:00Great start to a story, lots of details already an...Great start to a story, lots of details already and we need to see more!Jessica Knausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-5979465265557002942012-01-22T15:56:31.416-05:002012-01-22T15:56:31.416-05:00You really nailed his frustration. Great six! Cong...You really nailed his frustration. Great six! Congrats on the Reader's Choice Award!Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-77819098249491220762012-01-22T13:40:44.386-05:002012-01-22T13:40:44.386-05:00Oh, great start! I definitely want to keep reading...Oh, great start! I definitely want to keep reading.Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-90207094500405457532012-01-22T13:17:41.157-05:002012-01-22T13:17:41.157-05:00Love his voice, I can almost hear his accent. His ...Love his voice, I can almost hear his accent. His frustration comes through clearly too. Great work!Cate Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01371792447604980848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-72131260825192322642012-01-22T12:33:47.377-05:002012-01-22T12:33:47.377-05:00yes it's been a while, missed you. Excellent s...yes it's been a while, missed you. Excellent start to the story - first lines are a bitch. Recording studio - ah yes - total frustratioin.suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-45630840802808421332012-01-22T10:02:40.372-05:002012-01-22T10:02:40.372-05:00That is a fantastic snippet. I totally feel his pa...That is a fantastic snippet. I totally feel his pain. lolD Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-56902776267287333782012-01-22T10:00:18.197-05:002012-01-22T10:00:18.197-05:00Ooh, I'm so intrigued! Love it!Ooh, I'm so intrigued! Love it!Laura Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405372483109781087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-71912207607604182402012-01-22T09:32:30.119-05:002012-01-22T09:32:30.119-05:00Wow, great snippet.
First, but hopefully not the ...Wow, great snippet. <br />First, but hopefully not the last :-)Liia Ann Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16612018772016785403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-35685048330055260022012-01-22T08:22:04.829-05:002012-01-22T08:22:04.829-05:00really building up the scene...great writing Sarah...really building up the scene...great writing Sarah!AscensionForYouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01941964988475485164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-72706173764580115312012-01-22T08:19:31.764-05:002012-01-22T08:19:31.764-05:00Oh, I want more! Such a teasing six! :)Oh, I want more! Such a teasing six! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788003465566543496.post-44805131167940622882012-01-22T07:26:09.098-05:002012-01-22T07:26:09.098-05:00Great work weaving through the frustration. Well d...Great work weaving through the frustration. Well done!Alix Cameronhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com