It's that time again, Six Sentence Sunday. YEA! First off, I want to thank everyone who checked out my snippet last week. Your wonderful comments really made my day.
Here's a bit more from my romantic suspense, Not Without Risk.
Her mouth moved eagerly on his, exploring, discovering his taste. She couldn’t breathe. The heady, male scent of him surrounded her, made her head spin. Fire burned inside her belly. She felt the pull of desire, the heat simmering between them.
Felt herself go wet.
35 comments:
I love your excerpts from this book! A great kiss. :)
Thanks, Jessica!
Just a little taste does a girl good, huh?
Great six! Looking forward to more!
HOT!
@Ella Drake LOL, it sure does!
Oooh, nice 6! Yum!
all that, and just from the scent of him! WOW, he must smell SO good :) I LOVED this snippet. LOVED It.
That sounds like a great kiss.
Love how you use the senses in this scene. Very sensual.
Terrific 6. I definitely want to hear more
Wow! Now that's a kiss!
yummm, I can just taste him.
Absolutely delicious. Steamy. And delicious.
Nice how he appealed to her senses...I can almost smell him..mmm.
Very realistic...Awesome 6!
Hot. Wet. So yummeh.
Mmm. Great visceral reaction she has, and so real!
Wow awesome kiss!
Oh yummy kiss, it's all shimmery. Like heat waves off a sidewalk.
@Jo-Anne Kenrick Thanks, Jo-Anne!
Thanks everyone. Your positive comments make my day!
Smokin'!
Simple and sweet! Very nice.
Whew! Steamy. :)
That just melted the V-Day chocolate!
Nice...
gem
Mmmm!
A sensual six!
Wow, that's a hot batch of six sentences right there!
All that from a kiss? Wow.
Hot hot HOT!
Mm, nice.
Oooohh! Wow. Nice.
Absolutely deliscious!
Smokin!!! Very, very nice six!
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