March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 3/13




BY REQUEST: This week's six continues where we left off last week. (although it still doesn’t answer your question, does it?) *evil grin*

Remember, last week ended with Justin asking Paige, 'Did you sleep with him?'





“Not recently.”

Cocking his head, Justin met her vivid green eyes. “Could you please clarify that?”

“I could. I won’t.”

"I see," he replied and his lips curved.




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45 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

Love it! Yet, still want to know the answer.

Fallon said...

Oh she's saucy! Love it.

Ella Drake said...

These two are circling each other & I'll be they're clash will be worth the wait...
Though let's get on with it
:)

Gem Sivad said...

Very precise wordage that shows the personality of each character. Well done!

gem

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol loved the snippet!

Linda Morris, Romance writer said...

Ha! She's being cagey. Smart girl.

Ann Mayburn said...

Ha! Great response. I was wondering if she would tell him to shove it, in an oh so nice way. :)

Liz said...

Love her spunk!

graylinfox said...

Loving the wordplay between these two.

sassyspeaks said...

Six crisp sentences that says so much - good six !

Stacey Kennedy said...

Love the tension and attitude!! Awesome!

Liia Ann White said...

Oohh cheeky! Loving this

Viviane Brentanos said...

Oh but she is a tease. I like it

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Eleri Stone said...

Good answer. Can't wait to read more.

Laurie A. Green said...

Wonderful cadence on those last few lines. "I could. I won't." "I see." :)

Love the tension between these characters and how their personalities show through in just a couple of lines of dialogue. Great six!

Vivien Jackson said...

There's a lot of sizzle here; the sparks are sure flyin. Love it!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Wow - more suspense! You're mean ;)

Love the pic, BTW!

kayspringsteen said...

Perfect answer! Love the chemistry just this bit of dialogue shows.

Laura Kaye said...

Love the snark; it really ups the sexual tension. Great!

Jay Di Meo said...

Love the snappy dialogue! Great job.

Hailey Edwards said...

The way they're butting heads, the payoff will be well worth it.

Lisa Kumar said...

Nice six, Sarah! Love the dialogue--so snappy and 'showing.'

J.C. Martin said...

They are playing a dangerous game! Nice 6.

Roberta Walker said...

Love the conflict - loaded with sass! I like her :)

diannehartsock said...

"I could. I won't." I like her!

Roseanne Dowell said...

wow, definitly leave the reader wanting more.

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Great dialogue!

Christine said...

Love her not quite an answer and the chemistry between them!

Taryn Kincaid said...

I dunno. Seems to me she totally answered him! Love their interaction.

Cate Masters said...

Fun teaser! Hope to read more.

Sarah Grimm said...

So happy you all stopped by today. Thanks for the positive comments!

Lindsay said...

Got to love a woman who speaks her mind

Jessica K said...

Wow! You sure know how to keep us in suspense! Great use of terse sentences.

Lisa Fox said...

Lol! that is a very sassy six!

Arlene said...

Great snappy dialogue. The pace seems perfect, marking you as a writer whose every word I want to devour. Well done.

Susanna Fraser said...

Nice dialogue, with great chemistry!

Lauri J Owen said...

Your dialogue is, as always, fab. Great six!

Lynne Murray said...

It's not the information, it's the flirtation! Definitely a "more to come" kind of six!

J.Rose Allister said...

Awesome six! This is great dialog. My favorite dialog involves questions the other character refuses to answer. Really torques up the tension! And I love that he smiled in response...I wasn't expecting that, and it revealed something interesting about the character.

Jayel Kaye said...

It's like two wrestlers sizing each other up before throwing the first punch. What fun.

Savannah Chase said...

Fantastic...

wordyliving said...

This woman's some player! Well done! (Both of you: the author and the character)

Pippa Jay said...

I just love the way these two are dancing round each other. :)

Alyssa Fox said...

Love her spunk!

Keri Ford said...

haha! love that response!