Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday.
This Sunday not only wraps up the month of March, but this scene from Not Without Risk.
“Right, distracted.” She curled her bottom lip between her teeth and bit down.
A jagged awareness shot into his gut. “Ms. Conroy—”
“There is no way that whether or not I slept with Lee is of any use to your investigation. I did not kill him.”
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47 comments:
Great tension! I hope you'll share more from other scenes! :)
Lots of information in these six. I need more. *Hint,hint!*
Great six!
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Lots going on under the surface here. Looking forward to more!
That is some great tension. There is a lot going on here.
I'm going to sit with Gem and wait for more. Nice picture!
That's some nice tension. Yum.
Great suspense! So glad I bought this and can read whenever I want! :-)
Love the awareness between them in the face of the murder investigation.
(And oh, mama, that glistening six pack was not bad, either.)
Nicely done!
So much underlying tension with so few words!
Great six! Lots of tension in few words.
true - we don't kill everyone we sleep with - good six
Oh my goodness! What a wonderful snippet and tension. Love that photo too! :)
Ah but did she?
Love the tension here. I want more!
Love the tension here. I want more!
@Viviane Brentanos LOL Was wondering if someone would point out Paige still hasn't answered his question.
Little cagey, is she? That's okay, though: it helps build the tension. Besides, he can lick her lip better if she bites down too hard.
Love what's communicated through her body language--maybe moreso than her words. Great six. Great pic, too. :)
Hope you'll post more.
nice six! Nice tension.
Great six! More next week?
Nice six, I'm intrigued to find out why she's been questioned for a murder, did she love the victim or just sleep with him, did she even sleep with him? Is the police dude the hero, or is he a pig? Yeah, questions are rolling around in my head and I want answers.... talk about hooked!
How can you leave us like that?
Great six. Great tension. So, did she or will she sleep with the detective
@JoAnne Kenrick The detective is the hero. That's all I'll say. *evil laugh*
If you want to see a bit more, the last few Sundays are part of this scene.
nice tension. I'd love to hear more
Love the tension. Great snippet!
Great tension - sexual and non! :-)
Talk about distracted. That photo is really something.
Oh, nice. Definitely wondering what happened there.
Oh, so it's Ms. Conroy, but he's getting distracted...most intriguing tension flowing under the dialog--great six!
She's withholding information. Wonder why? Very suspenseful snippet!
Great six, Sarah. All it does is make me want MORE. :D
Lot's the layers to this snippet here. Very intriguing.
Juicy snip!
Nothing like being accused of sex and murder at the same time. Love it.
you had me wondering so many things with rhis 6... did she? sleep with Lee? know something about his murder that she's not telling? is she just distracted? anxious? lol, great job
Great six! I could feel the tension, and when you combine murder and sex, well... People love that!
This Six does exactly what it's supposed to! I feel thoroughly teased and left wanting! LOL.
This gets more fun as it goes on. She has a good point: why does he have to know if she slept with the dead man...
Hmm...interesting! Love the tension!
Oooh the tension...and those last two sentences - great job!
Can't wait to read more. :D
Great six and wow, awesome abs, er, I mean photo! Thanks for adding the eye candy. :)
Ohhh the tension....Fantastic...
"jagged awareness" - love it
Argh - just when we think you're gonna let us off the hook, you tease us again! :) Great six.
Nice subtle heat amidst what might otherwsie be an unpleasant (for her) situation. Thanks!
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