May 8, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 5/08



This week picks up where last week left off, with Isabeau studying Noah's...um...jeans. In case you missed it, you can check it out HERE.



Her body reacted before she could steel herself against it. A burst of heat snapped along her nerves. Her pulse raced. She was staring. She knew she was staring but she couldn’t stop.

He moved, sliding onto the stool directly before her, so that suddenly their gazes locked.


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  2. pick six sentences
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46 comments:

Pip Green said...

Loved the 'she knew she was staring but she couldn't stop.' Must be something worth lookin' at. :)

Jessica Subject said...

Great pacing! I love the same line as Pippa. :)

Chrystalla Thoma said...

lol I want to see what she's seeing! :-)

Rebecca Royce said...

Leaving us like that? NOOO!

Jenna Jaxon said...

And just how difficult was it, I wonder, to raise her eyes to his? :)

Gem Sivad said...

Hmmm. Abounds with sexual tension. Great six, Sarah!

Kim Knox said...

Great six, Sarah :)

Sandra Sookoo said...

Yummy! Nice job!

Liia Ann White said...

Ooohh what comes next?!

Gayle said...

Well, you can't blame a girl for looking! Great six!

Heather Thurmeier said...

Love the heat between these two. Great six!

Stacey Kennedy said...

Now that is chemistry! Holy Hannah!

laynap said...

More hotness this morning. Loving the attraction these too have...now I want MORE! Pretty please.

Vivien Jackson said...

The rhythm in this snippet was excellent. Feels like the sort of book that I could stay up late reading, not wanting to stop. Lovely, tight writing here.

Liz said...

Always love your writing!

Eleri Stone said...

Nice! Instant attraction.

Linda Morris, Romance writer said...

Hot but subtle. I like it!

sue said...

It's hard not to stare in that situation - good thing he stared back - well done

Lindsay said...

Bet she enjoyed staring.
Great six

Marie Dees said...

Love this six. Great tension between the characters.

Jessica K said...

Wow, her yes sure have to travel a long way. I hope she didn't hurt herself! ;)

Joanne Stewart said...

Terrible teaser, Sarah! ;) Loved the tension in this snippet!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Great chemistry going on here... her attraction and need comes off these sentences in leaps and bounds. Love this six!

Tigris Eden said...

Hot 6 I want to see the outcome of this very interesting interlude.

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Nice set up! I demand more! LOL

Vegetarian Cannibal said...

I sense something sexy is about to happen! Nice six!

Zee Monodee said...

Is there anything sexier on a man than jeans? :) Good one, Sarah!

Sarah Grimm said...

@Zee Monodee I don't think so. Well, maybe a man in nothing but jeans. :)

Sara York said...

Loved it!

Cate Masters said...

Love this teaser! Now we need more. :)

graylinfox said...

Now that has to be impressive. I want to know more.

writeintention said...

Oh, I love that last sentence. Very Sexy Six!!

Taryn Kincaid said...

I'm a such a sucker for gazes locking. Zing!

Mina Carter said...

Great tension :D Nice six!

Liana Brooks said...

Very nice. At this point she has to either bluff her way out ("Sorry, my girlfriend's sitting there.") or go straight for the kill ("I love your pants, can I talk you out of them?")

You are planning on posting the next six sentences next week, right?

ETA: Verification word is: assess

J.A. Beard said...

Hehe. Busted. Though somehow I doubt he minds. ;)

lexcade said...

MOAR. NOW. You can't leave a sister hanging like that, Sarah!

Laura Kaye said...

Oops--totally busted! Love it!

diannehartsock said...

What has her attention?! Sounds delicious. :)

Jayel Kaye said...

Good tension and I love her inability to deny herself

Luxie Ryder said...

We all know what it feels like when you can't help but stare! Great six :)

Verna Clay said...

There definite chemistry between these two!

Charlotte Gatto said...

Oh, wow now that is sexy! I can feel the emotion. Love it!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

ROFL! Love the staring. So awkward in a good way! Great six.

Kathleen Grieve said...

I love the building of tension here! AWESOME!

Alisha Robinson said...

oooOOOooo I love that last line! Steamy!!!