This week picks up where last week left off, with Isabeau studying Noah's...um...jeans. In case you missed it, you can check it out HERE.
Her body reacted before she could steel herself against it. A burst of heat snapped along her nerves. Her pulse raced. She was staring. She knew she was staring but she couldn’t stop.
He moved, sliding onto the stool directly before her, so that suddenly their gazes locked.
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46 comments:
Loved the 'she knew she was staring but she couldn't stop.' Must be something worth lookin' at. :)
Great pacing! I love the same line as Pippa. :)
lol I want to see what she's seeing! :-)
Leaving us like that? NOOO!
And just how difficult was it, I wonder, to raise her eyes to his? :)
Hmmm. Abounds with sexual tension. Great six, Sarah!
Great six, Sarah :)
Yummy! Nice job!
Ooohh what comes next?!
Well, you can't blame a girl for looking! Great six!
Love the heat between these two. Great six!
Now that is chemistry! Holy Hannah!
More hotness this morning. Loving the attraction these too have...now I want MORE! Pretty please.
The rhythm in this snippet was excellent. Feels like the sort of book that I could stay up late reading, not wanting to stop. Lovely, tight writing here.
Always love your writing!
Nice! Instant attraction.
Hot but subtle. I like it!
It's hard not to stare in that situation - good thing he stared back - well done
Bet she enjoyed staring.
Great six
Love this six. Great tension between the characters.
Wow, her yes sure have to travel a long way. I hope she didn't hurt herself! ;)
Terrible teaser, Sarah! ;) Loved the tension in this snippet!
Great chemistry going on here... her attraction and need comes off these sentences in leaps and bounds. Love this six!
Hot 6 I want to see the outcome of this very interesting interlude.
Nice set up! I demand more! LOL
I sense something sexy is about to happen! Nice six!
Is there anything sexier on a man than jeans? :) Good one, Sarah!
@Zee Monodee I don't think so. Well, maybe a man in nothing but jeans. :)
Loved it!
Love this teaser! Now we need more. :)
Now that has to be impressive. I want to know more.
Oh, I love that last sentence. Very Sexy Six!!
I'm a such a sucker for gazes locking. Zing!
Great tension :D Nice six!
Very nice. At this point she has to either bluff her way out ("Sorry, my girlfriend's sitting there.") or go straight for the kill ("I love your pants, can I talk you out of them?")
You are planning on posting the next six sentences next week, right?
ETA: Verification word is: assess
Hehe. Busted. Though somehow I doubt he minds. ;)
MOAR. NOW. You can't leave a sister hanging like that, Sarah!
Oops--totally busted! Love it!
What has her attention?! Sounds delicious. :)
Good tension and I love her inability to deny herself
We all know what it feels like when you can't help but stare! Great six :)
There definite chemistry between these two!
Oh, wow now that is sexy! I can feel the emotion. Love it!
ROFL! Love the staring. So awkward in a good way! Great six.
I love the building of tension here! AWESOME!
oooOOOooo I love that last line! Steamy!!!
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