Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday! As always, a huge thank you goes out to everyone who stops in every week, reads my six and comments. It means a lot to me.
This week, six more from my contemporary romance After Midnight. This week picks up immediately after my last six ended. In fact, I repeated a sentence to help you remember where we left off two weeks ago.
"Isabeau."
His voice brushed across her senses like a lover’s caress. His hand settled upon her arm.
His very large, very warm hand.
She opened her mouth, but no sound came out. Trapped by the contrast of his pale skin against her darker, golden tones, her mind blanked. He dwarfed her, which at five foot three wasn’t all that difficult to do. Her heart raced. His scent snaked into her lungs with each breath she took.
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56 comments:
With that reaction, it sounds like she's in trouble. Not supposed to feel that way about him.
Great imagery!
*shivers* Awesome snippet!!
Always hot when breathing becomes a problem. ;)
Yep, she's got it bad!
Very descriptive! Great snippet
Great show of her overwelmed senses!
Intense reaction! Love how overwhelmed she is!
WOW... love this six! The tension and sexual heat between them is addictive...and 'his scent snaked into her lungs' LOVE THAT LINE! Fab stuff.
"...his scent snaked..." Nice!
Ooo, love that tension!
Sexy, sexy!
"His voice brushed across her senses like a lover’s caress." Oh, yum. This is an awesome snippet!
Yum!! And still love that name!
I'm worried for her based on these sentences.
I like the hint of internal struggle goin on here. That's intriguing.
Sexy and romantic.
Sexy six!
Wow, now that is HOT! Nice.
Very sexy... Absolutely gets inside the character's head. Great six.
Loved reading about her reaction to his touch and presence. Great six!
Oohhh, sexy six. Love her reaction to him.
lovely scene - his scent snaked - good description
Oooh, loved that last line!
Love the imagery of the skin differences. My husband has olive skin, whereas I'm practically transparent, and I always notice that.
As a smallish gal, I do love the big boys. Mmmm. Nice snippet.
Very nice, paints a vivid picture both visually and emotionally.
I love it, great six
'His voice brushed across her senses like a lover’s caress.' Just loved that line. :)
Oh, yeah!!
Very sexy imagery!
Very nice indeed
Fantastic choice of words here.
Great six, Sarah!
I know I've said this before, but I love the name Isabeau. Vivid imagery!
Sensual and sexy scene. Love it! :)
Great six. Very visual.
The tension in this six is so palpable. Love how his voice is like a lover's caress!
Yummy. It's so tangible, but you didn't use a lot of words that people normally associate with tangible. Great job.
You use description very well to pain a picture. Great six!
Love that moment, when a man invades the senses for the first time. Very well written. yum...
I just imagine myself all petite and curled in his arms. Sigh. Very nice.
Uh oooooooooh.
I'm 5'1, so I know her pain LOL
Ooooooh, very sensual! Great imagery too.
The imagery is great. The scent snaking into her lungs. Great line
That six is so totally awesome. Well done
Great job. Hotness! I love it.
Best,
Allure
Lovely imagery. Very sensual six.
Yeah, I can feel her resistance melting.
Great tension and sensual details--hot six!
Absolutely love your words. Thank-you very much
Intense with great use of the senses!
Love it! :)
Ooh la la! Great snippet!
My heart raced too!! Can't wait to find out what happens next - what a tease :)
Great imagery! Love the discription.
Loved the "his scent snaked into her lungs" line. Vivid imagery. Great six.
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