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I'm sticking with After Midnight for while, since I now have an official release date of September 30, 2011.
She should have known, guessed it when he strolled into her bar carrying her music. Her pain-filled past could be uncovered with a few keystrokes in any Internet café. Her entire life spelled out in black and white, and a bit of it in all too vivid color. He’d seen it all—the truths as well as the lies.
You know what, I feel like we need a little bit of eye-candy today. And because SSS has grown so much since the last time I shared with you how I imagine Noah Clark to look, here he is.
39 comments:
Oh I want to protect her! Wonderful six and absolutely beautiful candy, extra nice visualization while reading. Thank you.
Tension and mystery. A great six!
Sounds like the poor girl's had some bad press. Hope he judges for himself. Nice six.
You do a wonderful job of conveying her pain through these six sentences.
Excellent job!
Definitely a teasing six. I want to hear her music, know her past and see him up closer. Yep, great six!
You are such a wonderful writer! Great six.
lovely and poignant :-)
Beautifully written six. And every day is a good day for eye candy like that!
Love the tension and mystery. Also love the eye candy!! hubba hubba!!
From your description, my mind conjured an image very similar to the photo you posted. Good job.
Ooh, he looks like someone worth spilling out that pain over!
I'm intrigued by the little bit of her past that's in "all too vivid color." What's that all about? Does he know about that too? Excellent six.
Can't wait to hear more about her past; you did a great job of conveying how much she'd hoped to hide it! And the Noah's photo is yummy!
Oh, yes, that's waking me up!
Oh, I really enjoyed this snipet! And yes, that's him! Loved the pic.
Nice six, I can almost hear her music.
Wonderful use of language. Perhaps his "desire" is to help her?
Fantabulous six, Sarah! I love the way this is moving. So intriguing!
And yeah, Noah's GORGEOUS.
Oooh, yummy pic! And the six were poignant, stripping her naked. Very well done!
I'm loving this six, Sarah! And congrats on the release date! WOOT
Great tension building. Oh, and thanks for the yummy pic.
Love this snippet! And it is so true about finding out about someone's past from googling them(!)
I wonder what he plans to do with the information he has. Hope he's not looking to cause trouble.
Wow her heart is just right out there, hope it's not made of glass. Smashing six :)
Oh, I hope he's planning to be nice to her!
I hope he can make it all better!
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
I hope he looks past the bad to the good.
Great tension.
Emotion packed snippet. I loved it.
So powerful in so few words! Fantastic job!
Now that he knows, I wonder what he'll thin, say, do? She must be on the edge of her seat waiting for his reaction.
Fabulous six! So few words, but they say so much. :)
I read your six sentences and was so intrigued that I clicked on the link to the excerpt. Fantastic! This book is now on my TBR list.
Great six that makes the reader want to know more! Love the pic, too.
sounds promising....can't wait to read it and thanks for the candy!
Liz
p.s. I'm in Michigan too--Ann Arbor!
Interesting six!
Oh no! You can just feel that shock of vulnerability.
Her turbulent emotions shine through in this Six! WTG!
Interesting. I wonder what he thought about his discoveries? And why he was tempted to make them in the first place?
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