June 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6/26



Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday! If this is your first visit let me say, welcome! To those of you who have visited before, thank you, your comments mean a lot to me.

I'm sticking with After Midnight for while, since I now have an official release date of September 30, 2011.


She should have known, guessed it when he strolled into her bar carrying her music. Her pain-filled past could be uncovered with a few keystrokes in any Internet cafĂ©. Her entire life spelled out in black and white, and a bit of it in all too vivid color. He’d seen it all—the truths as well as the lies.




You know what, I feel like we need a little bit of eye-candy today. And because SSS has grown so much since the last time I shared with you how I imagine Noah Clark to look, here he is.


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39 comments:

Alix said...

Oh I want to protect her! Wonderful six and absolutely beautiful candy, extra nice visualization while reading. Thank you.

Jessica Subject said...

Tension and mystery. A great six!

Cate Masters said...

Sounds like the poor girl's had some bad press. Hope he judges for himself. Nice six.

Trish said...

You do a wonderful job of conveying her pain through these six sentences.
Excellent job!

Gem Sivad said...

Definitely a teasing six. I want to hear her music, know her past and see him up closer. Yep, great six!

Liz said...

You are such a wonderful writer! Great six.

Sandra Sookoo said...

lovely and poignant :-)

Lisa Fox said...

Beautifully written six. And every day is a good day for eye candy like that!

Bree said...

Love the tension and mystery. Also love the eye candy!! hubba hubba!!

Cara Bristol said...

From your description, my mind conjured an image very similar to the photo you posted. Good job.

Rebecca Gomez Farrell said...

Ooh, he looks like someone worth spilling out that pain over!

Jenna said...

I'm intrigued by the little bit of her past that's in "all too vivid color." What's that all about? Does he know about that too? Excellent six.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Can't wait to hear more about her past; you did a great job of conveying how much she'd hoped to hide it! And the Noah's photo is yummy!

Marie Dees said...

Oh, yes, that's waking me up!

Verna Clay said...

Oh, I really enjoyed this snipet! And yes, that's him! Loved the pic.

Jessica K said...

Nice six, I can almost hear her music.

sue said...

Wonderful use of language. Perhaps his "desire" is to help her?

lexcade said...

Fantabulous six, Sarah! I love the way this is moving. So intriguing!

And yeah, Noah's GORGEOUS.

Zee Monodee said...

Oooh, yummy pic! And the six were poignant, stripping her naked. Very well done!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

I'm loving this six, Sarah! And congrats on the release date! WOOT

Cherie Marks said...

Great tension building. Oh, and thanks for the yummy pic.

gayleramage said...

Love this snippet! And it is so true about finding out about someone's past from googling them(!)

diannehartsock said...

I wonder what he plans to do with the information he has. Hope he's not looking to cause trouble.

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

Wow her heart is just right out there, hope it's not made of glass. Smashing six :)

Pippa Jay said...

Oh, I hope he's planning to be nice to her!

Xakara said...

I hope he can make it all better!

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

Lindsay said...

I hope he looks past the bad to the good.
Great tension.

Joanne Stewart said...

Emotion packed snippet. I loved it.

Dee Carney said...

So powerful in so few words! Fantastic job!

Ranae Rose said...

Now that he knows, I wonder what he'll thin, say, do? She must be on the edge of her seat waiting for his reaction.

Serena Shay said...

Fabulous six! So few words, but they say so much. :)

Sandy Nachlinger said...

I read your six sentences and was so intrigued that I clicked on the link to the excerpt. Fantastic! This book is now on my TBR list.

Lisa Kumar said...

Great six that makes the reader want to know more! Love the pic, too.

Liz said...

sounds promising....can't wait to read it and thanks for the candy!
Liz

Liz said...

p.s. I'm in Michigan too--Ann Arbor!

Liz Culver said...

Interesting six!

Eleri Stone said...

Oh no! You can just feel that shock of vulnerability.

Kathleen Grieve said...

Her turbulent emotions shine through in this Six! WTG!

Hailey Edwards said...

Interesting. I wonder what he thought about his discoveries? And why he was tempted to make them in the first place?