Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Thanks so much for stopping by! This week's snippet is from my romantic suspense, Not Without Risk.
“So you say.”
“You don’t believe me.” She was surprised by how much that hurt. “You still suspect me of killing Leroy, don’t you?”
“I believe in the evidence, Ms. Conroy, and until I have evidence that proves otherwise, you will remain a person of interest.”
“You actually think I would blow up my own car to divert attention from myself?”
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36 comments:
Awesome snippet. I totally need to know what led up to this point and where it's going to go.
Uh, now I have to know who killed Leroy and blew her car up. Good conflict and set up in these six.
The fact that she's hurt by his suspicion makes me wonder just what's between them! Great six!
Amy Durham
A very intriguing six! :)
I love the tension between them!
Nice sense of frustration in that convo. Great job!
He doesn't trust her. I wonder if there's a reason. Great tension between these two.
You know how much I loved this book! Love that it takes time before he trusts her!
Ouch, I bet that hurt...and I also suspect she remains a person of interest in more ways than one ;) Fab snippet xx
Intriguing six! Great conflict!
I can feel the tension! Great six!
I think it's just his excuse to keep her close to him. Great six!
Love that she was surprised by her own hurt. Great, simple characterization.
GREAT suspense! I'm a romantic suspense girl at heart, so you know you've got me here. ;c)
Great dialogue. Love the tension and disbelief seeping through their conversation.
Awesome six! Then again, that might depend on the type of car it was. I owned one that would have been improved by blowing up.
Great six - a mixture of suspicion and frustration.
Fantastic six
Sarah, sounds like another great book from you!
I can feel the infuriated disbelief. Love it. Great six! :)
Great tension in this six. Especially love the line "person of interest". ;)
Love the tension and show of emotion between them. :)
I like it. Good tension, good hook.
Great six. Love the tension!
Good dialogue, and I love the cover design.
He doesn't trust her. That's always hard. Hope she can prove herself innocent before he makes a big mistake with her.
:-/ Sounds like Ms. Conroy is in some hot water over here.
I like that he's serious about doing his job, even in the face of her outrage.
Oh! Very nice! I love how his suspicion hurts her.
These dynamics are very intriguing! He sounds hard and tough, and I wonder what's between them... :)
Sensational six, really well written
An intriguing snippet - can't wait to see what happens next! :)
:-) Well. of course he does, how else can he kekep seeing her? Great six.
I don't care how determined you are to throw off suspicion, blowing up your own car is off the grid. He needs to give her the benefit of the doubt! *smile*
~Xakara
PsiCorps #3
Nice! ...I wonder what he's thinking she's hiding if he suspects her of all that...
Ahhh....things are very black and white with him. Wonder if he will learn there are grey areas in the world...Nice Six!
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