January 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 01/09




Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Last week we met Dominic Price, the hero of my work-in-progress, a reunion romance titled Midnight Heat.

This week, let's get inside his head as he meets up with Rebecca again, after three years apart.




She bent over the front of him and a piece of her hair slid free from the intricate knot at the back of her neck, lay like fire across her cheek. He wanted to reach out and skim his fingertips over it. One touch. One touch he wanted so damn badly his hands began to shake.

Dominic dragged in air to loosen the knots in his stomach and only succeeded in filling his lungs with her familiar scent.


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22 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

Sounds like he's going to get his touch and perhaps more. Great excerpt!

Kathleen Grieve said...

One word here: SIZZLING!!! Nice...

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Love this six. Very nice.

Fallon said...

"...like fire across her cheek" love that! This six really makes me want more.

Lisa Fox said...

Hot, hot, hot! Very nice!

Sandra Sookoo said...

Very nice scene!

graylinfox said...

That deep breath can really do a man in!

laynap said...

An intriguing post.

Pippa Jay said...

Poor guy must feel like he's being tortured. :-P

Dawne Prochilo said...

Love the way her essence intoxicated him...I need a man like that

charmainegordon author said...

Touch away. It's his for the taking.

Julia Barrett said...

Good "six" choice! Everyone else put up a picture! I feel so stark!

Eve Cassidy said...

Very nice.

Arlene said...

Great line choices. The heat comes across wonderfully.

Laurie A. Green said...

Hi Sarah. Wonderful tension and heat between these two characters. "lay like fire across her cheek" Awesome. Great snippet. I'd love to read more.

Sarah Grimm said...

I'll post more of Dom's frustration next Sunday. Poor guy, he can't touch Becca. Not yet.

Jayel Kaye said...

Hot and steamy. very nice

Eleri Stone said...

Love how he's just falling apart over her!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Love the image of the strand of her hair laying like fire on her cheek. Very pretty.

Lex Valentine said...

That's hot. So is the picture. Rawr!

Marsha A. Moore said...

Oh, he's hooked for sure! Nice snippet.

heatherthurmeier said...

I love the tension he feels trying to resist her. Give in to temptation!!