Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Last week we met Dominic Price, the hero of my work-in-progress, a reunion romance titled Midnight Heat.
This week, let's get inside his head as he meets up with Rebecca again, after three years apart.
She bent over the front of him and a piece of her hair slid free from the intricate knot at the back of her neck, lay like fire across her cheek. He wanted to reach out and skim his fingertips over it. One touch. One touch he wanted so damn badly his hands began to shake.
Dominic dragged in air to loosen the knots in his stomach and only succeeded in filling his lungs with her familiar scent.
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22 comments:
Sounds like he's going to get his touch and perhaps more. Great excerpt!
One word here: SIZZLING!!! Nice...
Love this six. Very nice.
"...like fire across her cheek" love that! This six really makes me want more.
Hot, hot, hot! Very nice!
Very nice scene!
That deep breath can really do a man in!
An intriguing post.
Poor guy must feel like he's being tortured. :-P
Love the way her essence intoxicated him...I need a man like that
Touch away. It's his for the taking.
Good "six" choice! Everyone else put up a picture! I feel so stark!
Very nice.
Great line choices. The heat comes across wonderfully.
Hi Sarah. Wonderful tension and heat between these two characters. "lay like fire across her cheek" Awesome. Great snippet. I'd love to read more.
I'll post more of Dom's frustration next Sunday. Poor guy, he can't touch Becca. Not yet.
Hot and steamy. very nice
Love how he's just falling apart over her!
Love the image of the strand of her hair laying like fire on her cheek. Very pretty.
That's hot. So is the picture. Rawr!
Oh, he's hooked for sure! Nice snippet.
I love the tension he feels trying to resist her. Give in to temptation!!
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