Today my six is from my woman-in-jeopardy story,
NOT WITHOUT RISK, available now from
The Wild Rose Press.
The first forty-eight hours of any investigation are critical. After those first crucial days, trails tend to go cold. Once cold, dead isn’t far off.
One hundred and two hours after Detective St. John was gunned down in his hotel bed, Justin sat on a case colder than Becky O’Riley the night he tried to go a little too far in the backseat of her daddy’s ‘79 Chevy. The first forty-eight hours had been and gone long ago. Were he to get them back, he was less than certain they would be any further enlightened about what brought a Boston narcotics officer three thousand miles to his death.
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28 comments:
Very intriguing..
Nice - what to know more!
Coler than Beck O'Riley! What a great, descriptive line!
"Justin sat on a case colder than Becky O’Riley the night he tried to go a little too far in the backseat of her daddy’s ‘79 Chevy."
ROFLMAO. Awesome.
LOVED the makeout ref. Too funny. Well placed humor is perfect.
Colder than Becky...snicker. Love the humor while brooding about a murdered colleague.
I loved the analogy!!
Good beginning to a suspenseful story. Thanks for sharing!
Love the opening. Sucks you right in.
Love it. The humor is great and the murder of a detective is not a plot you see everyday.
You've intrigued me very quickly. Love the way you threw in his past in the analogy! Great six!
I agree, the analogy was perfect. Great six.
Loved the "colder than Becky". I'll have to go pick this one up!
Definitely very intriguing. Great!
Love it! I'm hooked.
Intriguing! Give us more!
Can't wait for more! Thanks
Intriguing.
I love RS. I'll be checking this one out!
Love your colorful language...really pulled me in!
Sounds like a very suspenseful romantic suspense!
Oh, that's good. Lots of suspense.
Went to see The Mechanic with my family and came home to find all of these wonderful comments! Thanks, everyone.
Wow! Can't wait to read more. Awesome sounding story, Sarah.
Sounds intriguing.
Oh, I like this... "Once cold, dead isn't far off"
love this...so blunt and to the point. Feels like all hope is lost. Nicely done!
AWESOME! Love the analogy!
Great description and well-placed humor. Nicely done.
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