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This week is the continuation from my work-in-progress, Midnight Heat. If you recall last week, Dominic has just apologized for walking out on Becca three years ago.
“Dominic, we… I can’t give you anything for the pain until after the scan.”
It was his turn to sigh. “It doesn’t matter.” There was nothing she could give him that would help.
Except for forgiveness.
Never gonna happen, mate.
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32 comments:
Sounds like she was about to say something. I wonder if she will be able to forgive him. Looking forward to reading more.
Poor Dominic.
Powerful and to the point!
Awww, poor Dominic!
I bet she can make him feel better. :)
Very nice! He's just making himself feel worse lol
He's really got it bad. You can almost hear hi heart breaking. Will she ever give him a chance?
Oohhh I like and dislike this! Poor Dominic
Great post Sarah!
"Except for forgiveness" Aww, so sad.
@Jayel Kaye She eventually gives him a chance, but it takes a while. After all, what he did to her... really bad!
Oh dear, Poor Dominic!
Can't wait to see what she says! Love this, Sarah. :)
Awww... Nice six!
Just want to give him a hug. Poor guy.
Great lines. Especially the last two. Terrific.
Makes me want to comfort him.
Awww... I want to know what happened, and if she forgives him....
Very moving - now I want to know if she does forgive him.
Awww, poor guy. :(
Except for forgiveness.
So much emotion and history packed into just those three words.
Love the twist in this premise. He hurt her badly and knows it, but now it's her job to heal him.
I really hope to read this one in the future.
I wonder what he did to her....
Aw...a tormented man! Great snippet!
Ohh, his heartache burns so deep. I love bittersweet romance.
Wow, it sounds like that man really screwed up and has realized it. I wonder if men can truly learn from their mistakes?
I do like forgiveness stories. Looks promising, thanks for sharing!
Nice, you have him in both emotional and physical pain.
Awwww :( Poor guy! Great excerpt!
Awwww
Very powerful.
poor guy...hope she gives him a break soon...really feeling for him! Great six.
My prediction: He will be forgiven...Can't wait to see that! Great Six!
Aww. Poor guy.
Poor guy! Keep torturing him. I'm sure it will pay off.
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