Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Last week Isabeau questioned Noah's honesty. But as you see today, it is she who is being dishonest.
“I don’t play anymore because the music is no longer inside of me. It’s gone.” Except it wasn’t. It cantered through her skull like a caged beast finally set loose. “Now if you want to know anything else, you’ll have to go back to your source.”
“What if I want the truth? Will I find it there as well?”
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51 comments:
Oo, love that last line!
~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS
'Cantered through her skull' Great Line - great six!
great dialogue - I agree with Xakara - last line was great.
Great 6! I loved the last line :)
Fabulous last line to wrap up the six!
Love the line, "It cantered through her skull like a caged beast finally set loose." Great snippet!
Nicely done! And your website is lovely!
Uh oh, someone isn't letting her lie!! Nice six!
I love the line "cantered through her skull..." Great words in this snippet.
That is a beautifully written six!
Nicely done! Loved that you used "cantered". :-)
Great writing and character reveals
What a powerful six rich in characterization! FAB STUFF!! Loved it.
So poignant. Great character. Great last line.
Poignant six! Great last line!! :)
This is such an intense six! love it!
I loved that line 'It cantered through her skull like a caged beast finally set loose' - really made me feel it.
Great tension in the way he calls her out at the end! Enjoyed!
Great interaction
"Cantered through her skull" is a great phrase; I can almost hear the thudding of hooves that is the music. Great six.
Great Six, love the last line.
Wonderful insight into a creative (if not altogether honest) mind!
'Cantered' is such a terrific word choice. Love it.
Powerful last 2 lines! Great job!
So curious about this secret she is hiding.
Well Well well ... tables turn ... I love the last line!
Excellent response - nicely done.
Great lines! Excellent six.
A great description. I loved it.
Interesting dynamic. Cool snip!
Someone's been naughty. Great parting line. I loved your six.
Love the six and the last line is so perfect. Wonder how she'll answer
You've created great tension. Very well written!
Oh wow! Awesome six...loved that last line!
Love the image of the music cantering through her head. It has an actual beat to it. Very nicely done.
Great six! I love that she's not fooling him a bit. :)
Other people already said it, but I agree: "cantered thru her skull" is a great line!
What is she afraid of? She sounds defensive. Wonder what 'truth' he'll find. Nice six.
Another good six. I loved the use of cantered.
I'm a fan of the last line too, I agree with a above. A fantastic six! Thank you.
Yup, love that last line too. Great six!
Loved the imagery of caged beast inside her skull! Really says a lot about her inner battle! BRILLIANT!
Mmm...great six, Sarah! ;)
Great six. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
Gin Price
Oops! Someone's got her pegged!
Interesting six! And great image about the music cantering through her skull!
Brilliant - and I loved that last line! :)
Ooh scandalous!
Great six. Keep em coming!
Snap. I like that last line.
Great image, the wild beast cantering... but 'canter' makes me think of a horse running at a specific speed, so, a horse controlled, which seems contrary to a wild beast :)
sorry, I'm super obsessive about word choices! ...but I want to read more!!
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