Just two more weeks of this scene from After Midnight, then it's a couple of weeks off as I prepare for it's September release and corresponding Blog Tour.
“Leave.” She paused at the emotion in her voice. “There’s nothing for you here.”
Desperate to have him gone, to quiet her painful memories as much as her mind, she shoved the compact discs across the bar top. The stack tipped, one slid off the other and spread out as she’d arranged them a few moments ago. Three unblemished, cherubic faces looked back at her, reminding her of how much she’d lost. “Please go.”
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48 comments:
I feel for her. A great six, expressing and describing her hurt.
An emotional six. I enjoyed them.
So very sad. Well done!
Great emotion showing here. I feel for her.
Love that little detail of her pausing because of the emotion in her voice. A little detail that says SO much!
The emotion comes across very well. Great six!
Oh so sad! I really do feel for her.
So much emotion! Nice job!
Great six, you can feel her heartbreak. Very moving.
Well done, Sarah. I felt her pain.
Such depth of emotion - but something tells me she really wants him to stay?
I can feel her desperation.
aww such a sad snippet, the emotion, Sarah -- oh my, fab six!
Her despair comes through so strongly through her words that you almost don't need to mention it in terms of what it feels like. This is a beautiful moment of understatement, letting the CDs take the fall instead.
the emotion oozes from her. well done!
A heart-wrenching Six! I'm sad for her! Well done!
to quiet her painful memories and mind. Too bad memories don't work as easily as taking a pain killer for a headache. Very well done.
Very emotional. Makes me want to read more.
You do emotion so well, Sarah. I love the pain you can feel from her in this. Great six.
This is heartwrenching, Sarah. Well done!
Very original and effective with the CD's. Great!
Great six, poor woman. :(
Compelling six! Her emotions are powerful!
Beautiful six. So heartbreaking and emotional.
Lots of emotion in this piece. Nicely done. :)
Very emotional and heartbreaking. I feel for her
Wrenched my heart!
Heartbreaking is right! It's so sad!
six sentences stuffed with emotion as well as enough to tell us where she is. :-)Great.
Awww, I'm glad I'm not the only one whose heart is bleeding for her.
her sparse dialogue is very well done
Sounds like things aren't going very well for her. Wonder if he just walks away. Hope not. Broken hearts suck.
Love the six.
Heartrending six, yet there is some kind of bond here too with him that can't so easily be pushed away!
Awww...my heart's breaking for her.
Heartwrenching. And pushing him away will only cause more pain. Hope this takes a turn for the better! Excellent six.
Her pain is palpable! Excellent six :)
Some rather intense emotion in this six. Very effective.
Leaves me wanting more! Great six. Lots of emotion-very nice.
Her anguish is palpable--great job!
I like the visual image of the discs. Also, I can feel her pain in the last sentence.
A lot of sadness in this snippet, very well conveyed. Great job!
An emotionally strong six - the kind I like best. ;)
Amazing character and an emotional scene. Love every part of it! :)
Oh! :( The pain in her words has left me kinda speechless.
Great emotional six.
Very emotional. Well done :)
Definitely makes me want to read more. Great job.
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