Happy Six Sentence Sunday! This week continues where last week left off.
Old fears and uncertainties returned. Her hand dropped away from her mouth to fist against her thigh. “Tell me something, Noah. Is it morbid curiosity that brings you in today, or something else?”
"I don't know what you're talking about."
Of course he did. Not for a minute did she believe the confusion that flashed across his face.
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53 comments:
But that's only four! I get two more, I need those other sentences!
~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS
Wow, you can tell I'm still half asleep. That is only four. Let me correct that.
Yikes! Now it's seven. Shhh, don't tell anyone. It made more sense with the seventh one. ;-)
I won't tell. I consider it more for me! *grin*
~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS
Uh oh! I feel bad for him! Her anger definitely shines through! WTG!
'Morbid curiosity'? I'm intrigued!
The "I don't know what you're talking about" gives a lot away. :) I want more though. LOL
Very good dialog that pulled me forward and set up a great scene leaving me intrigued and wanting more.
Sarah, I just want more and more. Thank you!
You have a knack for realistic sounding dialogue, which can be so hard to do. Her emotion shines through here too.
Great job.
Sounds like they have a history, and it's not good... I want to keep reading to see if he can convince her things have changed!
Yet another excellent six sunday snippet...or is that seven this week? LOL Who cares, it's fab and I loved it. morbid curiosity... that line totally rocks! xx
Great tension! Why is she so wound up that she has to keep her hand gripped? I'm very curious.
Great writing - as usual
Intriguing snippet. Can't wait to see more.
So intriguing...want to know more.
Plenty of internal conflict going on inside her! Great tension.
Great six!!
Poor Noah - I almost felt sorry for him!
Great tension. Wonder if he's gonna come clean.
intriguing - more to the story than meets the eye
Great snip! Love the tension between these two.
Compelling and realistic, no matter whether it's four or seven or whatever.
Great dialogue and tension. :)
Her simple gesture conveys so much. Nice six!
Tell her what you want! lol Great six!
What's Noah playing at? She just might have to use that clenched fist on him!
Nothing cranks the tension like asking someone his agenda and getting this kind of dissonance between the response and the POV character's reading of it. Somebody's got history, and we want to know more.
"Morbid curiosity," huh? Can't wait to see how this plays out! Great six...er, plus. :)
Great hook that leaves me wanting more. Good job.
Intriguing six!
Meh, if he's going to lie he's got to work more on being convincing, clearly!
You have to have the seventh sentence to make it complete. Love the four, six or seven.
Smart lady!
Great tension! Love the sparks :)
Agreed that this is very intriguing...
Deinitely intriguing, I want to know more!
Oooooooooh. This is gettin' good! Great snippet!
Hmm, I'm intrigued. :) What's he not letting on?
LOVE IT!
I loved the six, oops seven:) Great dialogue that really pulls the reader in!
Very intriguing! I definitely want more!
Great snippet. He doesn't have her fooled.
Damn stubborn men. I hope she lets him have it! Great six snippet, Sarah.
This is the first time I've read any of your Six Sentence Sunday stuff, but I loved it. Good Work.
~Piper
I like how she sees him as pretending to be confused. She must know him well. Great six!
I like the filtered perspective here. She interprets it one way, but is it her own bias or the truth?
Great set up! Is he being dishonest or is she suspecting an agenda that isn't there? Now we need to know!
Hmmm... Now that's intriguing!
Ooh, can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Seeems like she's really built up some walls, but I bet he'll manage to tear them down. ;)
Great dialogue! It really pulls the reader in. I wanted to read more.
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